Lost but not alone

[kimmypotter]

This was great my first hunt. I was looking for something to go at, to prove myself worthy. I looked around low in the high grass, as well as the other members of my tribe. Everyone was looking but couldn't seem to find something. Then, Aha a rabbit. I slowly crept up and then attacted it. It was mine. i turned around to show everyone my prize. No one was there. Where had they gone, had they left me? I turned back around to see two eyes staring back at me.

[x.Mocha.x]

Mayeka trotted through the grass beside the river, her pelt bristling with excitement.
"Hurry up!" she yelled, laughing. Behind her, her sister was running, struggling to keep up. The pair had crossed onto another boring Tribe's land to hunt and explore as those were the two things she enjoyed the most. The pretty fae grinned cheekily at her sister, then continued running, her wings just lifting her off the ground.
Suddenly, the Manen found herself face to face with another wolf, one that she hadn't met before.
"Hello," she said calmly, before trying to step around the stranger. She wasn't going to let this Tribe wolf get in the way of her adventure.

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The gray and cream female struggled through the stones, her eyes flickering from the ground infront of her to her sister, who was running along a stretch of grass ahead of her.
"Hurry up!" she heard Mayeka bellow. The young Manen glared at her sister, before squinting her eyes shut and letting her wings beat once, twice, then three times, lifting her body off the ground. With a heart full of fear, she tried to manuveur herself over the stones and onto the grass. With a sigh of relieve, she felt her paws connect with solid, furry ground.
Reko opened her eyes and galloped across the last stretch of ground before colliding with the back of her sister.
"What the-" she began, before noticing what her sister was staring at. A strange, Tribe smelling wolf was standing infront of them, a rabbit hanging from it's jaws. "Oh."

[kimmypotter]

I starred up at the beautiful wolf starring at me. I was too young to loose my tribe I would never find them. they were probabaly miles away. They preasure was too much on me. the forest started spinning. I felt dizzy and sick. Then everything went black, I had fainted. When I woke up a kind face was starring down at me. She was splashing water on my face. I heard a foice in the backgroung asked questions that I couldn't understand.

[Teri]

+ooc:Gah! I bunch of people are doing this. It's probably an accident, but please don't do it again.

You cannot say things like "When I woke up a kind face was starring down at me. She was splashing water on my face. I heard a voice in the background asked questions that I couldn't understand" unless it's one of your characters doing it. And here, it sounds like you're controlling Mocha's character(s). So, please try not to do that again, alright? ^^ +

[.:Yami:.]

I agree with Teri. I'll add that to the rules try not to control other players. Sometimes they don't want to do what you said they do.